说实话第一版我不太满意，纯白盐滩配漆黑陨石听着反差够足，跑出来却平。问题在于光——低角度的电影感没到位，热气那缕烟也太假。于是我把机位压得更低，给撞击坑加了焦痕和一缕若有若无的蒸汽，安静诡异的气氛才算立住。要挑刺的话，别贪心加太多烟，一多就出戏。放个我改到顺眼的英文版，谁觉得平可以先从光下手：
A moody low-angle shot of a heavy metallic meteorite resting at the center of a small smoking impact pit on a vast blindingly white salt flat, the dark scorched rock contrasting sharply against the pristine ground, a faint haze of steam rising from the crater, cinematic side lighting, minimalist composition, eerie and quiet atmosphere, focus on the jagged alien texture of the space rock, long shadows across the salt, subtle heat shimmer
